2012考研英语一作文 求改正和指导,我自己写的,大神门写得不好也要见谅...
可能是我没理解你的意思，所以觉得有误。看了你的后面，如果你这句话表达的是：该电影是关于一个秦朝刺客的故事，我觉得这样改比较好：That I am writing to you is want to recommend a movie regarding an Chinese assassin in Qin dying.The movie was named hero.英语比较喜欢采用被动写法。
Good morning，honorable(//dear就够了，我觉得。
第五行，From where I stand， 是From不是form~；第六行，是wrong不是worng；However 去掉因为你并没有表达和前一句相反，或者反驳前一句话的意思，However 是但是的意思，表示转折。
likes him very much.He is good at playing football and he wants to join a football club.He likes playing the piano，too. Because he thinks it made him relaxed.以后就直接把中文打到有道词典上，它会给你自动翻译的。